Essay #2 Topic Reflection

 

When I initially set out in my research I chose to explore the primary contributing factors to an increase in crime across the United States during the Covid-19 pandemic. As I began acquiring source material, I found that this question was somewhat broad and refined my question to the exploration of three possible influences. Even with my scope narrowed I spent a considerable amount of time searching the database, changing key words and scanning articles. One of the tips that Professor Harris provided early in the semester was to use AND in the search function, this was extremely helpful to me when locating applicable articles in the academic database. At first there was concern that not enough documentation would be available to analyze, as we are still currently experiencing the Coronavirus crisis,  however, this was ultimately not the issue. It was much more difficult tracking down reports about previous epidemics that corresponded appropriately with my topic. I noticed it is far easier to locate sources that fall into the “grey area,” or general information that pertains to your topic, but it is much more laborious to locate articles that specifically correlate. I ended up rejecting earlier selections and adding additional sources, to ensure each one substantiated any concepts that evolved as I wrote.

I was addressing an audience of unnerved citizens, primarily those located in urban areas where crime is more predominant. Readers who might have noticed more crime in and around their neighborhoods or watched as news became increasingly violent. Those who found themselves wondering what the reason for the spike could be and if perhaps the unusual circumstances of the pandemic played a role.

While composing this essay I felt the most difficult part was maintaining a flow of ideas while thoughtfully incorporating source information. Often I would find myself off topic, parallel to my research question but not quite hitting the mark. I am thankful I received a reminder to slow down and take my time connecting each thought process; and that it is important that my own voice be more prevalent than source material. One cannot be an effective writer by simply organizing the thoughts and opinions of others, you must create a personal approach. This is something I will definitely be mindful of going forward.

Comments ( 3 )

  1. Andrey Musin
    Hey Christine that was a wonderful reflection on the writing process! I feel similar that it is difficult to stay with your focus question but it definitely makes the piece one is writing more clear and concise!
  2. Jaden Fabro
    Your writing always flows so nicely and I'm sure your final research paper was well written too. I find your last statement very relateable as I was also more so just organizing the research I found when I was writing my first draft, but as I started to finalize, I added a lot more voice. And I do agree that this voice is what ultimately makes our research papers our own.
  3. Faith Morales
    From what I read in your first draft, your essay was very well written but I agree when you said it was hard to keep the flow. Sometimes when you have so much information and so many different topics you want to talk about it gets hard to maintain a storyline within your essay.

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